Topic for discussion
Is there lowliness or nobleness in careers?
(1) Your opinion
(2)Supporting evidence(论据)
·careers and their roles
·your ideal(理想的)career:what &.why
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(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
(3)语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰，表达完整。
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Is there lowliness or nobleness in careers?
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职业有贵贱之分吗？
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(1) Your opinion
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我认为职业并无高低贵贱。
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每个职业都至关重要。
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·careers and their roles
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清洁工人保持城市整洁，
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医生挽救生命，
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教师传授知识。
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我们应当尊重所有职业。
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·your ideal(理想的)career:what &.why
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我理想的职业是教师，
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因为我非常热爱孩子，
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渴望教他们新知。
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我将为梦想全力以赴。
职业有高低贵贱之分吗？
我认为职业并无高低贵贱。每个职业都至关重要。清洁工人保持城市整洁，医生挽救生命，教师传授知识。我们应当尊重所有职业。我理想的职业是教师，因为我非常热爱孩子，渴望教他们新知。
我将为梦想全力以赴。
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Is there lowness or nobleness in careers?
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jobs, no
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I think jobs have no lowness or nobleness.
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important
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Every job is important.
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cleaners, doctors, save, knowledge, respect
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Cleaners keep our city clean.
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Doctors save people's lives.
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Teachers teach students knowledge.
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We should respect all jobs.
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ideal, children, teach
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My ideal job is a teacher.
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I love children very much.
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I want to teach them new things.
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work, hard, dream
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I will work hard for my dream.
Is there lowness or nobleness in careers?
I think jobs have no lowness or nobleness.Every job is
important.
Cleaners keep our city clean.Doctors save people's
lives.
Teachers teach students knowledge.We should respect all
jobs.
My ideal job is a teacher.I love children very much.I want
to teach them new things.
I will work hard for my dream.
基础分：I am glad to tell how I cheer myself up.
I am a student in middle school.I have much pressure. Pressure comes from homework and exams.I feel tired.I
can't sleep well at night. I have ways to cheer up.First, I do sports every
day.Second, I talk with parents and friends. These ways help me relax.I feel much better now.
良好分：I am ①truly delighted to tell how I cheer myself up. As a student in middle school, I have a lot of pressure in my daily life.The pressure comes from heavy homework and many exams, which makes me very tired，even make me not sleep well at night. To cheer myself up, I have two simple ways.Firstly, I do sports every day, and it helps me relax and keep healthy.Secondly, I talk with my parents or friends when I am unhappy.
These methods really work, so that I feel much better than before.
优秀分：It goes without saying that a large number of people wonder whether there is lowness or nobleness in careers.
As far as I'm concerned, I firmly hold the view that there is no distinction between “high” and “low” in terms of careers, as every occupation contributes uniquely to social development.Take cleaners as an example; they maintain the cleanliness of our living environment. Meanwhile, doctors dedicate themselves to saving lives, which is crucial for public health.Thus, we should show respect for all professionals and value their contributions regardless of their social status or income.Our choice of ideal career should be based on personal interests, abilities and the desire to contribute to society.
My ideal career is to become an educator, who can inspire students and pass on valuable knowledge.I am determined to devote myself to this career and make a positive difference in the world.
